Saturday, April 08, 2006

A Broken Bottle

a broken bottle
in the playground
gorse flowers

Little Onion


Alan Summers said...

I really do like this haiku, and the obvious 'no-need' to incorporate a visual pause, because 'gorse flowers' acts as its own punctuation.

A joy to read out to myself, and all these strangers clogging up my street! (-;

Little Onion said...

thanks alan