thank you - and this afternoon he beat me again - but the dandelions - they have arrived - just one or two for now raising their yellow heads - soon they will fill the verges by the sides of the roads - the big verges by the big roads and down the central reservations the best of all - a carpet of yellow
Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI second that, except make him play left-handed, and hop on one leg, to make it more even. (-;
ReplyDeleteBeautifully understated haiku that will connect with many parents.
thank you - and this afternoon he beat me again - but the dandelions - they have arrived - just one or two for now raising their yellow heads - soon they will fill the verges by the sides of the roads - the big verges by the big roads and down the central reservations the best of all - a carpet of yellow
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great game even if they always beat me.
ReplyDeletei used to win... rites of passage... beating your dad at this then that...
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