Tuesday, March 28, 2006

Underground


underground journey
the closeness of strangers
on my breath


Paul Conneally

2 comments:

  1. Anonymous2:21 pm

    I like this one a lot, because of its conciseness, but especially for the twist of "the closeness of strangers/on my breath". Well done.

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  2. Like an angel in the underworld. A familiar feeling...

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